optimism and pessimism
July 9, 2009 § 8 Comments
The world seems to rush ,
calm and passionate ,
The world tries to repulse
The being into belonging.
Thought less actions ,
Valiant and confident decisions
Through the never ending days –
Somewhere a calender must end.
Materialist needs and wants,
Bubble happiness and disappointment,
Leading hue filled raiment,
The bold look- deference.
Laughter a relief ,
Smile a belief ,
Grip- to show we aren’t meek,
A loud voice, we aren’t weak.
Infinite patience ,
Trying to make sense-
Where a blind reverence
Thrives on a sour penance;
The serenity challenged,
The need to be indifferent,
Yet to feel is human,
To think even more so.
As if wont ignorance
Can cajole a man into callous
Penchant for the stained
Land(as it is) and
Kill the need
For purity and inheritance
The right of every member of the clan
Of human-a hand in the making of a nation.
Religious pride,
A sacrilege, a blasphemous divide.
A universal good,
Killed in the would and could,
Buried with a blood dirge;
Someday it will all be purged
By a tenacious will,
Of those whose sagacity wills.
Optimism-
The day is not far away.
Pessimism-
Who does have a say?
The light shines the brightest
Wow, vishesh!
I love it when you write poems. It seems to tell us so much more.
Religious pride,
A sacrilege, a blasphemous divide.
A universal good,
Killed in the would and could
I swear you painted my thoughts! π
Amazing!
Laughter a relief ,
Smile a belief ,
Grip- to show we arenβt meek,
A loud voice, we arenβt weak.
Very powerful poetry you got there:) Delight:)
umm lil hard to understand
Good one, kid!
Have you posted this before?I seem to have read this before on your space only.
loved it..amazing thoughts Vishesh:)
Nicely put into words. Good work.
@anamika: ha so we think alike π
@arch: π π π
@reema: which part of it is that you don’t understand?
@solilo: π
@indyeah: ha no..but maybe it was a similar thought π
@harish: π
Hi Vishesh,
A very mature and a thought provoking sonnet. Every line hold an intense thrust. I admire your views!