the light shines the brightest
August 11, 2009 § 7 Comments
When I see light ,
I know nothing can die.
When I see you,
I know I need not fight.
When I know you ,
I know what is right.
When we are together,
The world not perish,never;
click here to read the full poem.
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Brilliant! Its tough to believe someone can write so well n I hv him as a friend of mine 🙂
So proud of u Vishesh!
Luved these lines:
I know I am me ,
When I see you.
I know I am me,
When within I can feel you.
😀 glad you linked it 😉 – vishesh
I glued till the end..:) Lovely verses ..!
Very touching in deed
😀 😀 😀 -vishesh
ha thanks 🙂 – vishesh
Those 4 lines are really lovely vishesh, will read the whole poem soon and comment on that 🙂
K,take your time reading it 🙂 – vishesh
This is why I waited and didn’t rely in mine to this:)
I knew you would post it here too:)
your poem unleashes a torrent of thoughts but I also see something else in it:)
A poem for some girl:) your soulmate perhaps? 😉
Be with me forever,
I know you cannot.
But at least give me light,
When I fail to see mine.
Give me belief,
When I am stricken with grief ,
Give me love,
When the world does shove.
thats how I choose to see it:) the romantic in me refuses to understand anything else 😀
LOL *sigh , ha it was written with a friend in mind(one whom I haven’t talked to in a long time 🙂 )
seriously jokes apart Vishesh…the poem is beautiful!
One day I wish I can meet you,
So that I do know, I am alive.
What if I fooled myself into living?
What if I forced myself into breathing?
I cannot face such a stark moment,
For the verses I write are too benevolent.
If not for the boxes within words,
If not for the walls of metaphors
And the sly euphemism of order,
I would be a cruel being , with a dry heart,
Where life and death both fear to be a part.
A lot of people who read it will find something in it that they can identify with…
HA this sort of thing is something we all go through I guess 🙂 – vishesh
Although,I am so shocked that someone younger to me can write some ‘awesomest’ romantic verses, nevertheless I am in sheer proud for having read this one.
I loved every word of it. Beautiful beautiful and beautiful is the word. Such coherence. Such depth. So much life.
P.S:- Maatikitiyaa Yaarkittayaavadhu?:P:P
lol 🙂 illa maatikila 🙂 ha how I wish someone might fall for this 😉 😛 – vishesh
thanks 🙂 – vishesh
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