What lies beyond my sight?
July 23, 2009 § 15 Comments
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| From new camera1 |
The grass seems brighter on this side,
But who knows what lies beyond my sight.
To accept and stay,
Or move and find a way to a distant place?
Am I as good as I believe,
What can I really achieve?
Where does my heart want to lead?
Why is their a need to “succeed”?
Are dreams meant to be left,
And never in reality dwelt?
If only I was sagacious,
I would be more gracious,
Till then I try to be adventurous,
But do not know if I am tenacious or audacious.
The grass seems brighter on this side,
But who knows what lies beyond my sight?
the light shines the brightest 
Hey! I liked this the best.
‘Where does my heart what to lead?’ – heart want u mean?
‘But do not if I am tenacious or audacious’ – any word left out?
Sorry am nt doing any review but wanted to read it all exactly in ur words 🙂
-hey thanks for spotting the typos , this just happens I guess, where in inside your head you say the word even when you read 😛 corrected it now 🙂 – vishesh
Yeah I cud read them ….. just wanted to confirm 🙂
Thanks 🙂 The poem is beautiful!!!
Are dreams meant to be left,
And never in reality dwelt? – Luved these lines 🙂
hmm very nice i like it, keep it up.
And also, those pics on Picasa r simply beautiful! Gr8 colours n composition 🙂
😀 – vishesh
*/To accept and stay,
Or move and find a way to a distant place?
Am I as good as I believe,
What can I really achieve?/*
i loved this part.. 🙂
i feel like that too…
😀 😀 😀 – vishesh
Man, u hv awesome talent .. with the pen, behind the lens! Always stay this way, never let other things in life override whats closer to ur heart 🙂 Cheers!
lol 🙂 I hope I keep up with my passions…as it is I haven’t touched my violin for the past 2 months :O – vishesh
Oh another feather in ur cap! I am trained in Carnatic Vocal – i luv the violin 🙂
Where does my heart want to lead?
Why is their a need to “succeed”?
Why,…. me asks tooo
whats the answer? – vishesh
That was beautiful! I loved the way you ended it
‘The grass seems brighter on this side,
But who knows what lies beyond my sight?’
You have a way with words!
😀 thats what keeps me going 😛 the way these things pop up every now and then 🙂 -vishesh
🙂
😀 –vishesh
Where does my heart want to lead?
Why is their a need to “succeed”?
beautiful… this is what i am asking myself these days
i think a lot of us do… most of us seem to like these lines the best
yup we all do..but what is the answer? -vishesh
It is always better to hope something wonderful is waiting for us no? Why is success so important ? Lets just make the journey more fun and satisfying 🙂
oh I agree…but then success is sort of fun too I guess 😛 -vishesh
wonderful. and a rhyming poem!!! 😀
😀 😀 😀 -vishesh
Nice one… why do I want to succeed is the best question…
Destination Infinity
ha but what is your answer? 🙂 – vishesh
I ve asked some of these questions to myself…But I ve only kept asking thus far.Sometimes, I bleve its best to leave certain unanswered questions unanswered. Afterall, does it matter in hindsight?:)