What lies beyond my sight?

July 23, 2009 § 15 Comments

From new camera1

The grass seems brighter on this side,
But who knows what lies beyond my sight.

To accept and stay,
Or move and find a way to a distant place?

Am I as good as I believe,
What can I really achieve?

Where does my heart want to lead?
Why is their a need to “succeed”?

Are dreams meant to be left,
And never in reality dwelt?

If only I was sagacious,
I would be more gracious,
Till then I try to be adventurous,
But do not know if I am tenacious or audacious.

The grass seems brighter on this side,
But who knows what lies beyond my sight?

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§ 15 Responses to What lies beyond my sight?

  • Swaram says:

    Hey! I liked this the best.
    ‘Where does my heart what to lead?’ – heart want u mean?

    ‘But do not if I am tenacious or audacious’ – any word left out?

    Sorry am nt doing any review but wanted to read it all exactly in ur words 🙂

    -hey thanks for spotting the typos , this just happens I guess, where in inside your head you say the word even when you read 😛 corrected it now 🙂 – vishesh

    • Swaram says:

      Yeah I cud read them ….. just wanted to confirm 🙂
      Thanks 🙂 The poem is beautiful!!!

      Are dreams meant to be left,
      And never in reality dwelt? – Luved these lines 🙂

  • barcelonareporter says:

    hmm very nice i like it, keep it up.

  • Swaram says:

    And also, those pics on Picasa r simply beautiful! Gr8 colours n composition 🙂

    😀 – vishesh

  • oorja says:

    */To accept and stay,
    Or move and find a way to a distant place?

    Am I as good as I believe,
    What can I really achieve?/*

    i loved this part.. 🙂

    i feel like that too…

    😀 😀 😀 – vishesh

  • Swaram says:

    Man, u hv awesome talent .. with the pen, behind the lens! Always stay this way, never let other things in life override whats closer to ur heart 🙂 Cheers!

    lol 🙂 I hope I keep up with my passions…as it is I haven’t touched my violin for the past 2 months :O – vishesh

  • hitchwriter says:

    Where does my heart want to lead?
    Why is their a need to “succeed”?

    Why,…. me asks tooo

    whats the answer? – vishesh

  • Smitha says:

    That was beautiful! I loved the way you ended it

    ‘The grass seems brighter on this side,
    But who knows what lies beyond my sight?’

    You have a way with words!

    😀 thats what keeps me going 😛 the way these things pop up every now and then 🙂 -vishesh

  • sakhi says:

    🙂

    😀 –vishesh

  • monikamanchanda says:

    Where does my heart want to lead?
    Why is their a need to “succeed”?

    beautiful… this is what i am asking myself these days

    i think a lot of us do… most of us seem to like these lines the best

    yup we all do..but what is the answer? -vishesh

  • Meena says:

    It is always better to hope something wonderful is waiting for us no? Why is success so important ? Lets just make the journey more fun and satisfying 🙂

    oh I agree…but then success is sort of fun too I guess 😛 -vishesh

  • Reema says:

    wonderful. and a rhyming poem!!! 😀

    😀 😀 😀 -vishesh

  • Nice one… why do I want to succeed is the best question…

    Destination Infinity

    ha but what is your answer? 🙂 – vishesh

  • chewmysambhar says:

    I ve asked some of these questions to myself…But I ve only kept asking thus far.Sometimes, I bleve its best to leave certain unanswered questions unanswered. Afterall, does it matter in hindsight?:)

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