Love – my first 55 words fiction
July 5, 2009 § 20 Comments
“Love.”
“Whats that again?”
“A feeling , you feel it in here. It gives you hope.”
” I can feel a calm ,is it love? ”
“Maybe.”
“Is there anything such as ‘universal love’ ? ”
“Hmm…”
“I love life and everything in it..”
” There is too much wrath here , I hate it”
” I love you .”
“Your my love.”
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See, you could do it!! 😀 😀 😛
Imagination does work, isnt it! 😛 😛
“sweet love” 😀 😀 😀
Liked it:)
But tell me, is it imaginary stuff?;P:P
hey its nice.. 🙂
nice one 🙂
Very well written 😀
Bingo!
sweet!
“YOU ARE” my love not “your” my love 😛
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Love the LOVE. 😀
Hmm… so where’s the post ?
Looks like its just the title, considering your history of long posts.
dint understand the love… 😦
I don’t know why but after reading this I was reminded of a bot I had a conversation with 😛
You’re is not the same as Your
Whats with the LOVE all of a sudden?
is there something you wanna share Vishesh? 😉
Too much of ‘love’. and so Im never going to understand it 😉
@sakhi: lol 😛
@chiranjib: 😉
@arch: hmm..its fiction 😉
@oorja: 😀
@anamika: 😉
@neha: 😀 😀 😀
@reema: It is your here and you’re 🙂
@solilo: 😀
@anshul: hmm..k k 🙂
@hitch: hmm..why so?
@harsh: hi
@priya: see re to reema’s
@indyeah: oh its ntn , sakhi forced me to write 😉
@vimmu: lol 😛
I liked the way it started. In fact it would make a good impact without the last two lines.
@nita: hmm…maybe I should have finished it off differently 🙂