The dreamer
March 1, 2009 § 17 Comments
A breath of thought,
And a world bloomed.
In it all was as it should be,
Beauty and sweet to see.
Yet a thought corrupted the mind
And then started the works of a fiend,
The earlier world now grew weeds,
After all there is never peace.
And now as the weeds without the plants
Rot , as no food was there for thought,
The dreamer did realize,that what seed
he does bury,will determine what he does reap.
And now was not too late,
So determined to write his fate,
He opened his mind to the sky,to the sun,
And let the water run
To the good plants
And when few did pop,he plucked the weeds.
P.S:- My first exam in on Tuesday.
all the best dear. Study and take a break from blogging.
:) All the best and do well!!! now, go study!!! :)
Best of Luck! :-)
All the best buddy boy !
Hi Vishesh,
Now be a good boy and stop blogging (at least till the boards are over).
And ATB for your exams. :)
“You may say I’m a dreamer
But I’m not the only one
I hope someday you’ll join us
And the world will be as one”
– Lennon
and Do well in your exams.
A breath of thought,
And a world bloomed – Beautiful! I knw..dreams, poetry & art comes best when exams round the corner ;P all the best..
Vichu, All the best for your exams. Do well!
Ha ha. I like the way you wrote a long poem which I’m sure requires a long time and then you put a “P.S:- My first exam in on Tuesday” :-)
Do your best, sleep well before the exams and write it out real well. Best of luck!!
Dream on! :D
all the best :-)
Beautiful once again Vishesh :)
all the best for tomrw Vishesh!
Give it your best shot! :)
Stop dreaming and start preparing for your exam! :-P
Good luck for the examinations!!! :-)
Interesting Idea but the treatment could have been better.
Good one never the less … !!
Nice poem vishesh! all the best for your exams, do well :)
And at it you gaze
and now you have it on your face :)) truly said..greatest epidemic in the world i would say :)
wishin u tht smile would stick to ur face aftr xams as well :) do well..
thnks for tht tom & jerry..thts my fav series..cant get enough of it netime!
Amazing … Such Deep thoughts! Wonderful!