Peace of sound
February 8, 2009 § 15 Comments
Peace of sound,
Sense of belonging,
A Romanticism within,
A prosperous zenith,
An excess of emotions,
A blur of vision,
Clarity in that disruption.
Animals are born to survive,
Man is born to live,
Earth is a place of haunt
And to create it and lend life,penchant
Of all things alive-
An euphoric sense of divine;
The magic brush which speaks-
Of fantasies and gross truth-
A parade,a tribute,
To the power,which dares not to be mute.
The war within,
The war in the world around,
Faceless and dangerous,
An adventurer within ,
A daredevil about,
The verses of an invention
Hoarse to a few,
Alive and divine to the rest.
In the virgin gaps between the sound,
A belonging-the world is alive,
More so in the silence,
Than the condescending virtue.
In thought there is a superiority,
In life there is an affinity,
A negation to the moment,
An anti to the passion,
A verve to the mundane,
A candour to the bane,
That which seeks home,
When insults are thrown.
The peace of sound,
Shakes and bares the ground.
Releasing those who are bound
Within the pride of human crowd,
They thrall the arbitrary
And lend form and break immunity.
Pecuniary of the universe,
The adage of the moral serf.
And yet they give life,
And beauty they abide,
Within they strike,
The chords and chime the life,
And make humans forget their blight;
And in love,move high,
Towards their aptitude and divinitude.
Peace of sound,
Sense of belonging,
A romanticism within,
A prosperous zenith,
An excess of emotions,
A blur of vision,
Clarity in that disruption.
The light shines the brightest
Pecuniary of the universe,
The adage of the moral serf.
now what does that mean 😮
I don’t think the poem as a whole, wants to convey a particular message. I guess there are lot of musings and hidden messages in each of the lines. Some of which we don’t understand!
This writing style is unique to you Vishesh. Abstractism cannot get better than this!!
Destination Infinity
Good! Very good! 🙂
This is really very special! 😀
Hail the sound and light of peace 🙂
The light shines the brightest
The war within,
The war in the world around,
Faceless and dangerous..
so true,Life is spent most time waging wars are faceless people
Honestly,i don’t understand the poem in whole..Will come back with a dictionary and will comment again.Sorry for my poor vocabulary…
A romanticism within 🙂
“phew!”
Are you really only 17? This poem just ejected right above my head 🙂
But I guess you meant that there will be peace around soon with a zenith which shines the brightest leading us on and giving us hope, right?
Guess, I liked this:
An euphoric sense of divine;
The magic brush which speaks-
Of fantasies and gross truth-
A parade,a tribute,
To the power,which dares not to be mute.
Keep Blogging!
You must meditate or at the least have definitely read things written by people who meditate. It seems to me that that state of mind is the primary source for words like these.
In the virgin gaps between the sound,
A belonging-the world is alive,
More so in the silence…
I like 😀
hmm a good one i must say..the major highlight of this poem in my opinion is this
“Animals are born to survive,
Man is born to live,”
i liked the way the whole poem was ended..keep writing..
narendra
Let it echos ever, peace 🙂
There is peace in a sound that is not noisey. Nice Poem.
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