Thinking
January 8, 2009 § 8 Comments
A few moments in time,
Hours spent within the mind.
A few thoughts churned about,
Options battle their bout.
And hours fly by,
Yet a few moments,it is a sigh
In the clock of the world,
Yet in your herald,
It is of life and living,
Pictures, alive and playing.
Nothing can melt the thought,
And the winner of the bouts fought,
Shall be the one which decide the path.
And so chosen you will move,
Till the end,day in and minutes through.
Regret not what you chose,
World will always oppose.
And the best will rise,
When the world lies,
For the strength lies wthin,
Nothing in it is a sin-
Except not thinkingΒ
and dieing within.
And a few moments of thought,
Will mean what you foughtΒ
And what you win,Life
Is to be lived and strive
To it,we will.
Β
the light shines the brightest
Yep totaly..
Lovely poem as ever π
Soothing poem π
NICE!
Excellent! π I’m glad that you’ve shortened your poems! Not that the long ones aren’t excellent but the short ones are easier to read!
π
Confessional
Yep totally
Your lovely
Poem,
Nice and soothing
So it roams
Yet not too long,
Which might cause groans.
It gives me grief,
It gives me pain
To see my inspiration wane:
My poem is really
Really brief
Because I’m just
A comments thief.
@pria: π
@manasa: π
@kiran: π
@reema: π
@raj: lol π
@paul: a comment’s thief?
REALLY IMPORTANT CLARIFICATION
Not a “comment’s thief.” I may be a thief, but I do not belong to anybody’s comment. I am a free man, sort of.
I’m a “comments thief” – with no apostrophe. My “poem” is made from the prior comments.
Of course, this is very important for you and your readers to understand…