Cut the ropes
December 7, 2008 § 13 Comments
pull the noose so tight,
that to kill,it feels it has no right.
cut the ropes which bind
and take it away from the fiend.
No one can own
and for our sake we have borne
many an insult and hapless innuendo
but now this our life our crescendo.
The world shall be the world
and it can say it wants about us,herald
people can,passing on gossip,
but this our path,our trip.
Never drop the courage,
it is the best among the ripe vintage.
In you ,you know you are the strongest
and the light shines the brightest!
I like your short poem! 😉 🙂
I echo what Raj has said above.
In you you know you are the strongest… just from where do u get such lines??
This is an awesome one. I like the rhythm and melody that I hear as I go over it.
***In you, you know you are the strongest
loved this line a lot… very well written kid 🙂
wah.. not only for the poem but also for its length 😛 😛
hey this snow fall is by wordpress or its you who has added the feature??
whatever it is, its cool! 🙂
nice one …
you know what….
you’re better at short poems…
you should stick to this
cut the ropes!
@di: 😀 just like that 🙂
@writing for crows: 🙂
@sakhi: lol 😛 it wp’s new feature 🙂
@priya: lol,I like to write long ones 🙂 But yes shorter ones ,are better for putting a message across 🙂
First time I read your complete poem in one go 😉
nice poem.. you are good at writing, keep it up!