Those birds in the sky
November 10, 2008 § 13 Comments
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| From mobile photos! |
Those birds in the sky,
they push there wings out and fly.
As the sun sets,they return for the night.
In a flock,without a fight.
In a big city they live,
There haunts being window sills.
In the concrete filled with dark myth
They know every nook and labyrinth.
At dawn long before the stars are gone,
The skies they head and fawn.
For food the sweep down
In one stroke leaving the ground brown.
Yet all i see of them,
Flirting along the skies realm
Is a moments of wing spread glory-
Wish i too can be like the free.
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| From mobile photos! |
the light shines the brightest 
1. Nice lines
2. Nice pics of birds in sky
3. wer u trying to fly or..practice the Titanic scene or suiciiiiide?..lol π
Nice pics!
love to fly is indeed every creative souls’
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You have expressed my wish! π
But please don’t get carried away and jump off the terrace thinking that you have grown wings π We’ll miss your poems and photoshop creations! π π π
dont Ρ all wish the same??
beautiful lines π
I wish that too π
Hmm, nice thoughts Vishesh. I used to dream of flying a lot but now I don’t get those dreams.
That’s lovely and true filled words vishesh π
I wish for birds spirit those enjoying immense freedom in sky.
birds really aren’t all that free if you think about it. I mean they do have their responsibilities. It’s weird the way people associate freedom with birds. Even superman can fly, we don’t say he’s free?
@pj: lol I like to stand and practice balancing π
@reema: π
@princess π
@raj: lol π i won’t π
@lena: π
@nita: π
@jeevan: π
@nivedita: true…the grass is always greener on the other side π
Nice poem π
You wanna be a bird ? π
Hi *Vishesh,
Thanks for dropping by my place. π
Lovely poem and beautiful image of the birds in flight, too.
Reminded me of this pretty short but superbly inspirational book a friend had recommended me some time ago: “Jonathan Livingston Seagull” by Richard Bach.
U might wanna check out the book when you’ve the time, ya. π
Do take care & Keep writing.
Wishes, minerva*
Oooooh! The first pic is just lovely. I loved it. I wish to stand there in your place in second pic.
Waise, how was your flying experience π