Make this better for all

November 4, 2008 § 17 Comments

No more can one laugh
at the thought of wrath-
except those who have seen
or those who are innately mean.
And such people maybe few,
but their ways are like flu
spreading their voluptuous
chaste and magnanimous hate.
And those live and have lived
and for ever will,
unless and until
we find a way to keep them still.

And they have hurt and burnt
those who thought and learned
and then they try to anoint
by chanting a sorry,
as if that alone can take away
the misery and make the world free.

Yet,the brains have never died
and never shall.For there is no farewell
for those who dare to say there is no hell.
this is not a thank giving
as it was and is their purpose of existing.
Yet what do the rest,
the ones, whom rust,
takes over more than lust,
do,but burn and blow
as if it were a fireworks show.

We do not believe in the stake
nor in killing with hate,
so what do we do?To change this fate,
before time runs and it becomes too late?
“For fire,fire” said the bard once
but will it end menace?
Whose brains it that is washed
and who faces the aftermath of the shock?
Instead of day after day,giving sermons and talks
let us think and try to come up with thoughts
that will make this better for all.

P.S: for those who don’t know,who the bard is ,it is Shakespeare.

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§ 17 Responses to Make this better for all

  • JANE says:

    for fire, fire πŸ™‚
    the bard was ryte..
    no sermos, but thoughts?
    i say, no thoughts, but actions..
    but actions?? these blanched think, talk and act all of their own..
    i dun see evil blancing out netyme soon.. πŸ™‚

    nice thoughts..
    anoint chant chaste hate fireworks.. –> they colored the verse the most!

  • jane says:

    these blanched minds* think, talk and act all on their own,,
    i dun see evil blanching* out anytime soon,,

  • i love how you write poetry ever so often. its a gift vishesh…. it gets too hard for me to write poetry… i love reading ur poems…

  • Scietech says:

    Simply brilliant! πŸ™‚

    We do not believe in the stake
    nor in killing with hate,
    so what do we do?To change this fate,
    before time runs and it becomes too late?

    Cooooooooooooooool!

  • neilina says:

    I think what needs to be done with these kinda people. Is this is the only way – Make this better for all……..what about those who don’t want to be better and they are like the words in your poem. What to do then?

    Poem really made me to think, each line just reflected so many thoughts and I really went deep into! Thanks!

  • devika says:

    good thought, Vishesh!
    wishes!
    devika

    ps: i seen you at Paul’s.

  • arvind says:

    last para was good ..i mean i liked it better than other ones πŸ˜€

  • divkiran says:

    wowie
    well done vishesh
    m sure bard will love it too

  • Dinesh Babu says:

    Nice thoughts and when one says sorry it is better to let go so it doesn’t prolong the anger.

  • Vishesh,

    “Hmm…Paul don’t you think my poem the God brings all this in?”

    Maybe, but I can’t find it. But then they say God is without substance or form, so if your poem is a good representation, one would expect it to be elusive…

    Paul

  • Keshi says:

    o how I wish the world stopped and read wut Vish has to say! Then we’d all hv PEACE.

    Keshi.

  • Pj says:

    niice lines ….hope this world gets better
    πŸ™‚

  • Jeevan says:

    good thoughts to be shared. well writen vishesh!

  • Chirag says:

    “We do not believe in the stake” – Brilliant Man.

  • vishesh says:

    @jane: me too i don’t see it

    @sakthi: πŸ˜€

    @raj: πŸ˜€

    @neilina: ” I think what needs to be done with these kinda people.” er..didn’t get you…

    @devika: πŸ˜€

    @arvind: πŸ˜€

    @divkrian: πŸ˜€

    @dinesh: well sometimes we need to hold

    @paul: πŸ˜€

    @keshi: πŸ˜‰

    @pj: πŸ˜€

    @jeevan: πŸ˜€

    @chirag: πŸ˜€

  • Meenu says:

    //Whose brains it that is washed
    and who faces the aftermath of the shock?
    Instead of day after day,giving sermons and talks
    let us think and try to come up with thoughts
    that will make this better for all.//

    Better in life , better in style
    the thoughts need to paint
    colours that would brighten up
    all the world , weave more dreams
    shade them in pink and blue ,
    helping them come true …
    smile , warmth and joy ..
    making each one smile …
    smile from heart …
    all the way..
    all the time ..

    take care

    nice thoughts beautifully penned ..

  • SanityFound says:

    Do you ever stop getting better??? WOW

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