A sense of belonging evaded
October 15, 2008 § 13 Comments
And a sense of belonging evaded.
The last strength corroded.
Yet the energy refused to die,
for within life is held high.
Nothing can break,the will,
nothing can kill,the within.
The power of life,remains
staunch and untouched,
by all the world’s rusted
rustic austerity.Theย
incognito negativity,
tries to hold you,to the ground,
but the valour wings of spirit,
will never shun the virtue
of seeking truth and surrender to
the tyrants of the fiends.
Let it be years or seconds,
your tendency is to move towardsย
the heavens,which is the acme,
of all spiritual haunts,for nature
is such that,its affinity is towards,
creation and not destruction.
Yet for a few moments,
something curbs and deters
the music from playing-
something holds the bow,
and refuses to let go,
the sense of belonging
tries to hold and tries to freeze
the fire and tries to behold
the nature it lacks.
And the chain may be tainted
with that causeslessness,
yet the fire will burn,
for that is what in life,we earn.
You will never fall,
you will never be made to halt,
as long as trust,you place –
in yourself and understand,
the fire within and use it to begin,
a whole new beginning.
The sky is waiting to be conquered,
and those who don’t seek have endangered,
their own life’s worth,
and the strings strain a bit more.
Forever the allegro will continue ,
for the life’s movement is fast
and though transitory it may seem,
till the world’s end,the beam,
travels and the sound never perishes.
And the sense of belonging may evade,
but within you,belief will elevate,
and emancipate,
even that choked voice,
and life will get to its poise.
the light shines the brightest
very philosophical, as always… but loved it.. The true spirit should never die! ๐
Truly “the light shines the brightest”!! ๐ ๐
Well written!!! ๐
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The poem is a good one but I wanted to ask u somethin…
Hw do u manage to write such long poems? Hav u ever tried ur hand in Haiku?
haaaa.. lol at haiku ๐
neways,
really inspiring poem, esp when i’m in a dingy mood!
makes me believe n break free..
makes me wan that dull now-n-then beat to grow into an allegro ๐
heeeee..
feeling it man..
the light doth shine for me!
(just that i can’t see it now, but i know i’m cumin closer)
Wow..so you are back with a revenge!! Wonderful one. Each of the words you chose is perfect!! Way to go! ๐
Ok..now please dont reply with a smiley sign..TYPE SOMETHING!!! ๐ LOL!!!
**Nothing can break,the will,
nothing can kill,the within.
so very true
no one reely can!!
hey
phew, coming by after long!!! nice poem, very true, something we all go thru….
loved these lines- we all need to believe in it 10000%%% ๐
as long as trust,you place –
in yourself and understand,
the fire within and use it to begin,
a whole new beginning.
Awesome ๐
The power of life indeed. Well written!
@sakhi: ๐
@raj: ๐
@diana: Haiku ๐ ya i know,i like to write like this,it is more about expressing ๐
@jane: ๐ hope you feel fresh now ๐ mento fresh,fresh ๐
@manoj: lol ๐
@pj: ๐
@aarti: ๐
@manasa: ๐
@dinesh: ๐
oye.. u ate up an “A” :((
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A true spirit will not lose its lit even in the cold wind. Nice to share it.