about a flower
October 8, 2008 § 14 Comments
From root |
Between leaves,
between thoughts,
sat a single flower
-it lived only for a few hours.
Yet in those few hours,
it did live life,
until it was moved by force,
from that which gave it life.
And in its time of life,
atrocities were none,
ubiquitous were its brothers,
who among the myriad leaf,
sang ,till day,
all through the night,
as if they would never die.
And when they all were taken away,
from their lap of its life,
they did bare a scent,
one fresh and magnificent.
And till the scent spread,
they were honoured.
And then as that too left,
nothing of them was felt,
and to the soil they went,
to be buried-
they became carcass,
to fuel the tree,
on which they were born free.
Yet even if for a few hours,
nothing matters but self,
for individualism is not a mistake,
but for living’s sake.
And while the scent may go,
and their beauty may burn,
they held life,for flaunting,
and for that sake died,
but it was not a martyr death,
but one where,its value was felt.
Though by now,it is all long past,
it shows that life’s value is till it lasts,
and so in that,we need to live,
and try to see what is beyond the tree,
and the sense of detached belonging,
gives life a sense of being free,
for freedom is knowing,
what we are and not doing nothing.
Presence is to be felt,
and belief in self,
if the best wealth,
for all storms can do is break a petal
and all drought can do is kill.
Our scents may last forever,
or till dawn,
but life is such that our fawn
will help,even when we are gone-
for what we do is to build a tree,
one which we call humanity,
for that sake,let us do our duty,
that is to create and metamorphose,
and leave behind a stronger base.
Life is short like flowers and thaz why its said live up to what comes and done dwell to dig much.
loved the last four lines… π NGood one..
Lovely poem . . . lovely picture . . . ;-P
wonderful poem!
nice one dude..
I liked the first 5 lines π
Hmmmmmmm
Nice… especially – for individualism is not a mistake,
but for livingβs sake.
seems like u been readin a lot or Ayn Rand…LOL
**Presence is to be felt,
and belief in self,
if the best wealth,
for all storms can do is break a petal
and all drought can do is kill.
these r the best lines i found
wow! simply cool!!
I love the scent of Jasmine. My hometown is full of it. Even when I am away from home If I sit back and think of it it feels great. The flower might not be there but it leaves a lasting memory. Nice poem.
Hii, Me here for the first time.
And till the scent spread,
they were honoured.
And then as that too left,
nothing of the was felt,
and to the soil they went,
to be buried-
they became carcass,
to fuel the tree,
on which they were born free.
I loved these lines. This is so true about life n humans.
WOW Vish, really deep!
**but life is such that our fawn
will help,even when we are gone-
Loved those lines alot…made me think alot.
Keshi.
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