September 9, 2008 § 14 Comments
we are all united indeed,
we hate each other mutually.
It is no more my country,
everyone is hungry,
to see the other deceased.
One mouth lesser to feed,
it is the survival of your creed.
every action and deed,
are purposefully levied,
into sowing the seed-
of hatred and communal greed.
Who cares if people are injured?
who cares if children are hurt?
The past was dense,
with death and ugliness immense.
The present is covered by this unjust menace,
but is to take it up and do the penance?
The future generations,
are the ones,who will feel-
that the nation lacks toleration.
In the name of good God and religion,
we do acts,by the devil’s commission.
How does religion matter,
when lives are being shattered?
how do caste and status ,relate,
when life is cheated by faith?
Whose peace,should they seek?
what right,for this lawless beak?
In the name of selfless interest,
in the name of the people’s interest,
comrades are being hurt,culled like pest.
When in need,where is the unity -indeed?
there in a need,and let us help with our deed.
As people of a nation,
let us remove this God damn depression.
No God will say,kill in my name.
No God,will hurt,for all are just the same.
Influenced by this post.
Amazing how the words just pour out of you Vishesh! You feel very deeply indeed. If I could bow to your thoughts, I would.
Lovely poem, Vishesh!
We were supposed to be a secular, tolerant country in terms of religion when compared to our neighbour Pakistan. But the notorious hate-spewing Taliban-equivalent of India want to turn the country into another Afghanistan, as they cannot tolerate diversity or anything that goes against their ideology of hate. They are the curse of Hinduism, which is a tolerant religion. Shame on them!
Beautiful thought! Let there be light 🙂
I enjoyed the poem.. The rhyming is also so good. Surivial of the fittest has changed into survival of the creed. A good point though
Perfect! Loved the last two lines 🙂
Very Well Written, Reminds me of Dire Straits
“Theres so many different worlds
So many differents suns
And we have just one world
But we live in different ones”
wow quite inspirational..nice! And so true. We r many but we r ONE.
U ok Vish? HUGS!
True and touching… 🙂
“No God will say,kill in my name.
No God,will hurt,for all are just the same.”
Similar to line from Saare Jahan Se Achha
Mazhab Nahin Sikhata apas Men Bair Rakhna
Hindi Hain ham, watan hai Hindustan Hamara
(Religion does not teach mutual enmity,
We are Indians, and India is our homeland!)
@raj: i agree wtih you!! shame indeed!
@shiva: TY 😀 yes i agree…
@manasa: 😀 ty 😀
@chirax: hmm…can you tell me more about it?
@keshi: i am fine 😀 yup..we are many but we are one 😀
@reema: thanks for the translation…:) have never known the meaning 😛
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Beautiful thoughts. “No God will say kill in my name” is absolutely true, yet Man has created an illusionary God or the Pseudo God in every religion and seems to be following them rather than a God as just a powerful spiritual presence and nothing more.
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