the moon
August 9, 2008 § 10 Comments
A spot of light,far away,
reflecting the sun’s rays.
As the suns sinks
you rise and shine,
giving hope,
that our system is fine.
Once in a while you are full,
and once is a while you hide,
yet we know ,you look over us,
and the tales upon you are numerous
and the inspirations draw countless.
When will you ever rest?
when will you stop to see,
that you are bound and can be free?
Or is it that you know too well,
the consequences when you are free
and understand that life is full of slavery?
Somewhere far away,
there must be an angle for you too,
and let it take you,
let it guide you,
like it has to,forever.
maybe you are an eye,
maybe you are a God,
maybe you are the harbinger,
whatever you are,
you are a spot in the night sky,
far away,yet close by,
so through more light,
on the mysteries of life-
that is all i ask you.
the light shines the brightest.
Such a beautifully uplifting verse! 🙂
And again you put up a Flicker pic! 😦
wonderfull again …
🙂
i hope next poem is no stars…
but i guessu have written one already abt starts..
right ???
Nice poem 🙂
But few corrections: suns sinks??? Guess it should be a single sun.
loved the pic
I guess, you are a satellite of earth 🙂
Dude!!!
u wrote it???
actully i am awe struck thts y askin….its really nice
i hope my angel, my guiding lite is thr…rlly need one rite now… 🙂
Good one 🙂 The questions you asked are so profound for your age.. 🙂 I think some of these questions were answered in the “bhaja Govinam” song 🙂 Or did that song add more to the nystery? What do you say?
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Fabulous poem!
“When will you ever rest?
when will you stop to see,
that you are bound and can be free?
Or is it that you know too well,
the consequences when you are free
and understand that life is full of slavery?”
Simply stunning!
Aim for the stars and if you want to reach the moon! 🙂
Very sweet! uplifting is the word! like sameera says!