1..2..3 contest -poll

August 1, 2008 § 19 Comments

Ok,well i think the topic itself was very say not the ordinary type…There were totally four entries,so have read and vote for the one you think was the best 🙂

#1)Priya:

the beautiful attractive flowers as they r
tell me something so silently
some deep thot gets provoked inside
me wen I see u
i feel i need to watch only 1 goal in ma life
just 1 aim to shoot and not 2 as 2 scatters my depth, my penetration to the inside
and my 1 goal to stop injustice in the world
can only be done
if I watch the world
after removing the rose tinted glasses
i wore till now.

#2)Manoj

A tribute to all the people who lost their lives in the recent bomb blasts:

Let the budding spirit bloom like “a flower”,
in this time of gory and violent hour,
to see the humanity atleast from far.

Let the spirit envisage the “blossom of power”,
that helps us put two and two together,
and find out the ones that made our nation wither.

Let the eternal”hope” spread its colour,
on our “spirit” and our “power”,
as we pray for the peace to shower!

PS: The first flower is our Spirit, the other flower in the second photo is our Power, and the three colourful flowers in the third photo are Hope, Spirit and Power.

#3)Xylene

When I am all alone,
I lose my color and tone.

When I have her, its love,
Where others will take a bow.

When our children blossom,
The colors will shine this mausam. (hindi)

#4)Sameera

She lived a colorless life,doing what she was supposed to do.Deep within,she hoped one day there would come someone to paint her dull canvas.

Seasons passed,and yet came none.Still,she carried on with a smile on her face and a spring in her step.She knew happiness is in giving,and she gave with all her heart.

Wherever she went,she left behind fragrance,one that emanated from the depths of her soul.Many a face she lit up,many a joy she conjured.

And then one day,when she woke up,she saw she was not plain anymore.The canvas had been filled with the colors of her soul.

So who do you vote for?

update:-Contest closed.It is a tie between Sameera and manoj.

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§ 19 Responses to 1..2..3 contest -poll

  • lena says:

    they all are beautiful indeed 🙂 I like them all, and especially like Manoj’s idea of spirit, power and hope.
    But i will vote for Sameera not because i love her so much but because when i read this piece it took my breath away and it was just like “WOW” 🙂

  • Priya says:

    Yeah, Sameera !! Very nice ending !

    I liked everyones actually…

  • leafless says:

    I vote for Manol. It’s so poignant and reflective. By the way, you can add polls to your blog’s sidebar.

  • pria says:

    Since I know Sameera writes well, I will go with first 3 people who I have never met in blogsville.

    I like Priyas poems but have to say– too much short little words (chat/slang) are used in poems. Sorry….

    Manoj poem is good and a great tribute to all those people….

    Xylene- She is precise, simple and elegant. and I go with that.

  • Priya says:

    though I am a competitor I vote for SAMEERA she writes so well. the others hav also written well manoj and xy.
    Me too far from poetry.

  • lakshmi says:

    loved all of them..difficult to judge poetry

  • Sameera says:

    Thanks Lena,Priya and Priya(Joyce) 🙂

    PJ did a nice thing by voting being a contestant and I follow her.

    I vote for Manoj’s.

  • arvind says:

    I vote for manoj’s 😉
    but all 4 were awesome/… i know how difficult it is to write poems..
    never written any 😦

  • Sakhi says:

    though all are good, i loved Sameera’s! d best! 🙂

  • Aneesh says:

    Have to choose one, right? All three are good and I’ll go for Priya!!

  • Aaarti says:

    sigh.. i missed it!!

    but all these are awesome stuff!! shall come back n vote! now too tired 🙂

  • Aaarti says:

    Oh, darn it.. might as well take some time out now… and read what they’ve all painstakingly penned down…

    ok..decided~!!

    i vote for manoj!!! 😀

  • priya says:

    I Vote Manoj, he did really good job…….

  • Manoj says:

    Thanks to lina, pria, leafless, priya, Priya, lakshmi, Sameera, Arvind, Sakhi, Aneesh, Aarti.

    All the poems, I felt, were good.
    Priya, your poem was good 🙂
    Xylene, Your poem was simple and superb! 🙂
    Well, following Priya and Sameera lemme vote too, as a contestant. I vote for Sameera! 🙂

  • Pavv says:

    I liked Sameera’s one before……..and started liking manoj’s one……..donno whom to vote??

    Well, made my mind up………I am going with manoj!!!!!

  • pavan says:

    I liked Sameera’s one before……..and started liking manoj’s one……..donno whom to vote??

    Well, made my mind up………I am going with manoj!!!!!

  • Kabir says:

    I vote for Sameera…

  • I liked sameera’s entry far more than anyone else’s

  • Xylene says:

    pria, its a HE !!! I am married with a beautiful wife.
    well you are not the first one who name all the chemicals a SHE. 😀

    OH no, I failed miserably. 😦
    But thanks Manoj, priya. 😀

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