the storm within-a feeling
June 23, 2008 § 7 Comments
It tightens you from within.
It takes everything you believe in,
away from you.you loose sight
of yourself,you become as small
as a lost elf.Your body was
lost in a theft.
You feel that life has no use.
You hear a hundred things,yet refuse
to listen to that something within.
it eats you slowly from within,
you loose hope,you wish to end it all
yet you cannot.
You search for your lost light.
You can’t see it,even at night.
You take flight,
you try to fight,
with all your might.
You try to survive.
It has a grip on you.
It makes you repent all that is you.
It makes you wish hate,
it makes you think about a bad fate,
it tries to make a hell’s gate
all around you.
you want to come out of it.
You search for the way out.
You go round and round,
something needs to be found.
You lose yourself in a prayer,
the light shines the brightest
Very well written! 🙂
Do change the spelling of “feeling” in the title!
Hmmmm…. Interesting… Did you get drenched in the rain and get inspired for this poem!?
Feeling within and outside differs coz most of the time we donno if it is right or wrong. I can say fear of expression is what amtters.
@ nikhil: no.. 🙂
@pria: true….yes we are all scared 🙂
Feels refresh and expressive when confusion was cleared about the thoughts that everything is because of us. I feel the truth inside those lines.