the ever lasting observer
June 16, 2008 § 11 Comments
A few rain clouds hid you,
yet they couldn’t hide you,
forever.You live for ever,
our life is way too quicker.
what truth do you hold?
what do you,which was once told?
i am brave and bold,
tell me all that was unsold.
a few seconds,we live on,
a few years,you live on,
yet who is older?
is everything for the better?
as you shine and go by,
somewhere,which is really high,
tell me before i die,
all that ever went by.
i trust my light,
and i trust you-light.
so do not betray
just say.
to me tell your tales,
i want to listen,
please i will listen,
please,oh! please being!
the light shines the brightest
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Brightness, we need darkness to see the shape of sun. u begin it well 🙂
Nice.. love the rhyme factor…. 🙂
so, did u go for the blog meet?? how was it?/ tell tell..
Ah, the Sun! Although I’m not inclined to “worship” if there ever was anything worthy of that kind of homage, it would be the Sun. “the ever lasting observer”
Very nicely written! 🙂
As usual u mesmerise my mind with ur verses Vish..
Keshi.
@jeevan: 🙂
@aaarti: i didn’t go to thing ya 😦
@handmaiden: lol,true…i like the sun…want to go to it 😉
@sakhi: 🙂
@keshi : 🙂
Awww, shucks.. thot u mite have atleast been there~~ 🙂
hows school????
Lovely verse!
Hope your exams went well 🙂
@aaarti: ya skl is going gud 🙂
@ sameera: 🙂 yup…except maths…:)
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