thoughts on the world
May 5, 2008 § 16 Comments
we need world peace,
someone needs to teach
everyone how to live,
in peace.someone needs
to give a hand,
for others to take
and with love teach
that unity is better
than animosity.
someone needs to fetch
what we all know-
the love and unity.
what do we gain
by killing others?
what do we gain
by hurting others?
once a great race
has been reduced
to such immoral lows,
that no more is there
shame in causing suffering.
and that someone is you.
all of us have a penance,
we need to put back our race.
it is all we owe
to our origin.
what went wrong ,went wrong,
everyone is equally guilty,
the wounds have been severe,
a few who were notorious and clever,
have mislead the race with a wager.
as i write i think again what is love,
what is friendship?
what is all this anyway?
why do all this?
finally we all end somewhere?
the only thing which stands
is that,it is what i owe,
it will not be sin if i don’t
but misery to others is
misery to self,
without a free universe,
there will be no verse left.
lack of pain is not possible,
yet we all choose our own salt,
let it be just the right amount.
Lovely…fabulous..awesoem and so very true!
Well said vishesh! By teaching anyone from very young age would lighten the brightness more and the touch at the heart will speak peace.
” that someone is you.”
Are you really 16 ? You amaze me ! Really !
Try poems with longer lines. They work better !!
Cheers !! π
HI vishesh
Thanks for the visit
You really write soulfully
Kep it up
Beautiful!
That was a good one.
@meghna: π
beautiful, no gains ultimately,because the past comes back to haunt
and thank you for commenting on my blog!, i wrote in something on mine after quite a long time…
@priya : π
@jeevan: π everyone will learn π
@nightingale : π
@anu: thank you π
@sf: π
@pria: π
@ayushi: the past haunts if you want to haunt…it teaches if you want it to teach..