Love – my first 55 words fiction

Posted on July 5, 2009 by vishesh unni raghunathan

“Love.”

“Whats that again?”

“A feeling , you feel it in here. It gives you hope.”

” I can feel a calm ,is it love? ”

“Maybe.”

“Is there anything such as ‘universal love’ ? “

“Hmm…”

“I love life and everything in it..”

” There is too much wrath here , I hate it”

” I love you .”

“Your my love.”

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20 Responses

  1. sakhi, on July 5th, 2009 at 5:39 pm Said:

    See, you could do it!! :D :D :P

    Imagination does work, isnt it! :P :P

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  2. Chiranjib, on July 5th, 2009 at 5:51 pm Said:

    “sweet love” :D :D :D

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  3. chewmysambhar, on July 5th, 2009 at 6:58 pm Said:

    Liked it:)

    But tell me, is it imaginary stuff?;P:P

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  4. oorja, on July 5th, 2009 at 7:15 pm Said:

    hey its nice.. :-)

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  5. kanagu, on July 5th, 2009 at 7:55 pm Said:

    nice one :)

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  6. Anamika., on July 5th, 2009 at 10:51 pm Said:

    Very well written :D
    Bingo!

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  7. Neha Kapoor, on July 5th, 2009 at 11:51 pm Said:

    sweet!

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  8. Reema, on July 6th, 2009 at 1:30 am Said:

    “YOU ARE” my love not “your” my love :P

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  9. VandeNikhilam USA » Love – my first 55 words fiction « the light shines the brightest, on July 6th, 2009 at 5:33 am Said:

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  10. Solilo, on July 6th, 2009 at 9:17 am Said:

    Love the LOVE. :D

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  11. Anshul, on July 6th, 2009 at 9:37 am Said:

    Hmm… so where’s the post ? :mrgreen: Looks like its just the title, considering your history of long posts.

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  12. hitchwriter, on July 6th, 2009 at 11:46 am Said:

    dint understand the love… :(

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  13. Harsh, on July 6th, 2009 at 12:02 pm Said:

    I don’t know why but after reading this I was reminded of a bot I had a conversation with :P

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  14. Priya, on July 6th, 2009 at 5:31 pm Said:

    You’re is not the same as Your

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  15. Indyeah, on July 6th, 2009 at 9:59 pm Said:

    Whats with the LOVE all of a sudden?
    is there something you wanna share Vishesh? ;)

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  16. vimmuuu, on July 6th, 2009 at 10:58 pm Said:

    Too much of ‘love’. and so Im never going to understand it ;)

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  17. vishesh unni raghunathan, on July 7th, 2009 at 8:29 pm Said:

    @sakhi: lol :P

    @chiranjib: ;)

    @arch: hmm..its fiction ;)

    @oorja: :D

    @anamika: ;)

    @neha: :D :D :D

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  18. vishesh unni raghunathan, on July 7th, 2009 at 8:33 pm Said:

    @reema: It is your here and you’re :)

    @solilo: :D

    @anshul: hmm..k k :)

    @hitch: hmm..why so?

    @harsh: hi

    @priya: see re to reema’s

    @indyeah: oh its ntn , sakhi forced me to write ;)

    @vimmu: lol :P

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  19. Nita, on July 8th, 2009 at 10:42 am Said:

    I liked the way it started. In fact it would make a good impact without the last two lines.

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  20. vishesh unni raghunathan, on July 9th, 2009 at 10:21 am Said:

    @nita: hmm…maybe I should have finished it off differently :)

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